No actionable next-step in last 3 sentences
Cargo-cult Guilt → Persistence → Ask : following the structure without understanding why each element exists.
How each offense was applied · 3 total
“Hi there, Great meeting you at the conference last week! I wanted to follow up on our brief chat about workflow automation. We guarantee 20…”
“Great meeting you at the conference last week”
“200% ROI within the first quarter — or your money back”